Hi Max, Your narritave had the most amazing hook I had ever heard of in our class.It had good discriptive words and this didnt happen now,it happened then!I love the way you told us that you were going to tell every one this was when you were 12.I also have a question,would you be in the 20's to 40's since you are rewinding to your 12's? From Jennifer
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Hi Max,
Great discription for a narrative!
And your picture was totally auesome!
Robbie
Hi Max,
Your narritave had the most amazing hook I had ever heard of in our class.It had good discriptive words and this didnt happen now,it happened then!I love the way you told us that you were going to tell every one this was when you were 12.I also have a question,would you be in the 20's to 40's since you are rewinding to your 12's?
From Jennifer
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