Room 13 is learning how to write an exposition (persuasive text) this is my one it is about why homework is bad for you!
People say homework is a waist of time I agree because you already have six hours of school, people have sports on after school plus homework is a waist of my time.
Firstly homework is bad because you have six hours of school. At home is your only break from work because the next morning you have to go to school again.
Secondly sometimes people have sports on then they have to do extra home work the next day which courses a lot of stress.
Lastly homework is a waist of time you learn enough at school you could be at the pools or on the couch watching television but instead you have to do more homework.
Katy perry dosen't do homework neither does Justin Beiber so why should we?
By Caitlin
15 comments:
Hey Caitlin,
We really loved your blog post.
we really agree with your statements because all your points were very very persuasive .
Keep up the good work!
From Ruby + Celia!
Very interesting. I agree Katy perry and Justin Beiber don't have to do home work and we shouldn't too
Max.J & Jack.C
Hi Caitlin i realy think the same about that we shouldn't do homework but what will replace home work.
1. fishing
2. car driving
3.partys all day
4.watch movies all day at school
From Anton
Room11
I really like your blog post .But i think we should still do homework.Homework is so so fun.Just joking homework is so boring we all need a break.
By Willie
Hi Caitlin
we agree alot we think homework should be banished from school FOREVER!!! and NEVER return for now.
Hi Caitlin, I enjoyed reading your exposition trying to convince us that kids shouldn't have homework. Just secretly I don't really like homework either and I especially liked your conclusion where you compared yourself to Katy and Justin. I wonder if they had homework when they were your age?
Wow that was a really good persuasive text I might be changing my mind about it.................. maybe????
I liked your arguments they persuaded me a lot.
GREAT JOB!!!
From: Maddy
Hey Catlin,
That was an awesome
exposition.I really
really liked it!
Your statements were
very great and
persuasive.
WELL DONE !!
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