A moment in time: Waitangi Day
I saw mouth watering biscuits.
I smelt the dry grass outside.
I herd the adults talking happily with joy.
I felt the soft dry grass.
I wondered what it would feel like to be grass.
By Manutaeao
6 comments:
Ashley
said...
Hi Manutaeao, Your writing was awesome, I like all the descriptive words. I would like to read more. From Ashley room 10.
6 comments:
Hi Manutaeao,
Your writing was awesome, I like all the descriptive words. I would like to read more.
From Ashley room 10.
hi Manutaeao
Great writing. You had Descriptive words.
-Riley Room 11
I really loved reading your poem. Your descriptive words made me feel like I was experiencing the same thing as you did.
Well done!
Andrea
i like it
Hi Manutaeao,
What great Descriptive words.
I really liked your story love to read more.
From Briarn
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