Monday, March 5, 2012

Creative World

Blue Teddy

There once was a blue teddy

his very funny name was Freddy

the teddy had a bear

with light furry ears

there was once a blue teddy

6 comments:

Stella said...

Hl Caitlin,
I really like your adjectives and how you described what colour the teddy bear was!
I also really like the picture because I think it looks really cute with the teddy holding and even smaller one!
Keep up the good work!!!!
From Stella

Stella said...

Hl Caitlin,
I really like your adjectives and how you described what colour the teddy bear was!
I also really like the picture because I think it looks really cute with the teddy holding and even smaller one!
Keep up the good work!!!!
From Stella

Stella said...

Hl Caitlin,
I really like your adjectives and how you described what colour the teddy bear was!
I also really like the picture because I think it looks really cute with the teddy holding and even smaller one!
Keep up the good work!!!!
From Stella

Stella said...

Sorry i accedentily pressed something!

Kerry said...

Hi Caitlin, Well done on your rhyming poem. The illustration you did exactly reflected your poem.

Raiden F from Ponsonby Int said...

Hi Caitlin,
I liked how you described your teddy and used strong adjectives.
The picture you used is fantastic and relates to the subject.
Have a great year!!!!