Thursday, March 31, 2011

A narrative


A narrative is a piece of work that room 16 is learning to do . It has to have a beginning a middle and an end. It also needs a problem and a solution. My narrative is about jake I tell him not to press this button 10 times but he presses it and that is what my narrative is about

By Ben

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Talofa Ben, great to see your class blog up and running and I must say the kid pix work looks fantastic. Well done. I have a question regarding your narrative, why didn't you want Jake to press the button? sounds interesting so I will have to visit your class and read the rest of the story my self. Good sharing and keep up the great work. Tofa soifua Otalani

Anonymous said...

WOW Ben we fort your writing was outstanding because you had so much detail. BY OLI

Room 16 Team Players said...

@Otalani: Thank you for sending me a comment it was interesting. Jack wanted to press the button because I kept on telling him not to, Jack is liar and a person you cannot trust. I hope that answers your question
@OLI: Thank you for commenting on my post it was good to get your feedback

From Ben (supported by Ethan)

Jennifer said...

Hi there Ben,
while I was listening to your glimps of work it must have been great!Also here is a question from me,what would the botton do if Jake was to press tthe button?
From Jennifer