DAY 16 and the bean is growing straight and tall like a giraffe with a long neck. The leaves are tongues, like slobbery black licorice - wet and smooth. That makes my bean nice and healthy
I loved the way you described your bean. It sounded like it was coming to life. Your drawing is amazing too. I cannot believe how much your detailing has improved in one term. Well done Casey.
all hall Casey the queen of kid pix.Casey your writing is short but its describe your bean how its grown by telling long its . ps keep the great work up. savannah.s
Hi Casey I really enjoyed your descriptive writing.It was short but very descriptive.Mabye one day you'll be a pro writer who has written many famous books, with illustrations too! And mabye, just mabye you might have an autograph of your own like hannah monntana or myley syres (whatever her name is).You'd be lucky then! From Alex.V.
you must have been working very hard on that drawing! Im very proud of you even i cant do a piece of drawing like that! on a computer. Also i really love the adjectives you used to describe your fantastic plant! great job!! casey
you must have been working very hard on that drawing! Im very proud of you even i cant do a piece of drawing like that! on a computer. Also i really love the adjectives you used to describe your fantastic plant! great job!! casey
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I really like the adjectives you used to describe the plant. You must be doing some great things at your school. Keep it up
Miss Lavakula
I am a Kiwi(Samoan) teacher teaching a grade 5 (Year 6) class at Shanghai American School.
You guys are doing some great work! Keep it up room 16.
Mr. T.
I loved the way you described your bean. It sounded like it was coming to life. Your drawing is amazing too. I cannot believe how much your detailing has improved in one term. Well done Casey.
That is one very cool bean plant drawing, Casey. I haven't seen such fine detail on Kidpix before. It will set a new standard for us at Kaipara Flats.
Hi casey!
Cool as description . Great work on the picture!
From your friend
Loimata
Dear commenters
Thanks for the positive feed back on my bean you are all very kind.
Thanks
Casey !.
To Casey the words you picked are very discrptive the words fit your picture perfectal.
From Elle
all hall Casey the queen of kid pix.Casey your writing is short but its describe your bean how its grown by telling long its . ps keep the great work up. savannah.s
Thank you Savannah and Elle
For posting a nice commet on my bean.Thanks alot.
casey.
Hi Casey I really enjoyed your descriptive writing.It was short but very descriptive.Mabye one day you'll be a pro writer who has written many famous books, with illustrations too! And mabye, just mabye you might have an autograph of your own like hannah monntana or myley syres (whatever her name is).You'd be lucky then!
From Alex.V.
I really liked the descriptive writing about your bean.I liked how you used a giraffe in comparison.Keep up the good work.
Dear Casey
I like the way you drew your bean Casey. It looks like it's a bean plant coming to life.
From Vera
Hey casey
you must have been working very hard on that drawing! Im very proud of you even i cant do a piece of drawing like that! on a computer. Also i really love the adjectives you used to describe your fantastic plant! great job!! casey
From misty room 16 .
Hey casey
you must have been working very hard on that drawing! Im very proud of you even i cant do a piece of drawing like that! on a computer. Also i really love the adjectives you used to describe your fantastic plant! great job!! casey
From misty room 16 .
Dear my recent fans.
Thanks for sending really nice feedback on my writing that is really nice.
Thanks again
Casey.
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